Robert Munroe
Response to Adam G’s Notion to See the Ocean, Tony and I
Creative writing 9am class


Dear Adam,
Cool story...it was very personal and gave me a glimpse into your life...its funny how much you can assume about a person from a story about a road trip. I found I could hear the frogs and see the moose. I even felt the water as you floated in it. The only thing I was confused about was the second paragraph....It kind of didnt make much sense. I reread it a couple of times and it was very confusing. Hope this helps