Tuesday, November 4, 2008

Robert Munroe
Response to Robert Haller’s The Summit
Creative Writing class 9am
Oct 5th 2008


Dear Robert,
Awesome story....I loved the way I felt like I was there, it was very descriptive...your use of imagery was professional. I liked the build up..I thought for a split second noone was going to jump and was glad Nick did at the end.....I didn’t read it myself, I had my boyfriend read it to me so I could get past some of the typo’s. I would like to read more about Nick and Holly’s potential love affair. That to me is a good short story when I want more. Nice work. It seemed real

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