Robert Munroe
Response to The ILLusion by Desha Gregory
Creative Writing 9am class




Dear Desha,
The poem was very interesting, it was existential to say the least. I think these are all things we at some point in our lives think about. The beginning 4 lines were very sad, I was wondering if thats the tone you wanted to set. I felt a twinge pain and sadness for you. It made me feel as if you didnt want to be alive. I was also wondering why you spelled illusion with the first three letters capitolized? The poem made me sad.