Robert Munroe
response to Child from the side by Roody Jean-Baptiste
Creative writing 9am class

Dear Roody,
Wow interesting, I got a sense of empowerment from the poem. I especially liked the 8th and 9th lines...very strong. I got a sense you need to get out of a shell that you have created or that you feel you have been placed in...I hope that is the reaction you were hoping for from the reader...it is a little heavy. I had to look up a couple words (tippling and approbation) Kudos I love to learn new words. I was curious why you used the word impotent body..what did you mean by that?