Robert Munroe
Response to Adam G’s Notion to See the Ocean, Tony and I
Creative writing 9am class


Dear Adam,
Cool story...it was very personal and gave me a glimpse into your life...its funny how much you can assume about a person from a story about a road trip. I found I could hear the frogs and see the moose. I even felt the water as you floated in it. The only thing I was confused about was the second paragraph....It kind of didnt make much sense. I reread it a couple of times and it was very confusing. Hope this helps

Robert Munroe
Response to Eric Cook’s Brisk poem
Creative writing 9am class
Oct 5th 2008


Dear Eric,
DEEP....Wow...I liked the premise...the dichotomy of winter and possibly depression. It was an intense poem. The only thing I would change would be the 5th line from the bottom. I would try to come up with a more intese way to recall “brain freeze

Robert Munroe
Response to Robert Haller’s The Summit
Creative Writing class 9am
Oct 5th 2008


Dear Robert,
Awesome story....I loved the way I felt like I was there, it was very descriptive...your use of imagery was professional. I liked the build up..I thought for a split second noone was going to jump and was glad Nick did at the end.....I didn’t read it myself, I had my boyfriend read it to me so I could get past some of the typo’s. I would like to read more about Nick and Holly’s potential love affair. That to me is a good short story when I want more. Nice work. It seemed real