Robert Munroe
Response to Adam G’s Notion to See the Ocean, Tony and I
Creative writing 9am class
Dear Adam,
Cool story...it was very personal and gave me a glimpse into your life...its funny how much you can assume about a person from a story about a road trip. I found I could hear the frogs and see the moose. I even felt the water as you floated in it. The only thing I was confused about was the second paragraph....It kind of didnt make much sense. I reread it a couple of times and it was very confusing. Hope this helps
Thursday, November 6, 2008
Tuesday, November 4, 2008
Robert Munroe
Response to Eric Cook’s Brisk poem
Creative writing 9am class
Oct 5th 2008
Dear Eric,
DEEP....Wow...I liked the premise...the dichotomy of winter and possibly depression. It was an intense poem. The only thing I would change would be the 5th line from the bottom. I would try to come up with a more intese way to recall “brain freeze
Response to Eric Cook’s Brisk poem
Creative writing 9am class
Oct 5th 2008
Dear Eric,
DEEP....Wow...I liked the premise...the dichotomy of winter and possibly depression. It was an intense poem. The only thing I would change would be the 5th line from the bottom. I would try to come up with a more intese way to recall “brain freeze
Robert Munroe
Response to Robert Haller’s The Summit
Creative Writing class 9am
Oct 5th 2008
Dear Robert,
Awesome story....I loved the way I felt like I was there, it was very descriptive...your use of imagery was professional. I liked the build up..I thought for a split second noone was going to jump and was glad Nick did at the end.....I didn’t read it myself, I had my boyfriend read it to me so I could get past some of the typo’s. I would like to read more about Nick and Holly’s potential love affair. That to me is a good short story when I want more. Nice work. It seemed real
Response to Robert Haller’s The Summit
Creative Writing class 9am
Oct 5th 2008
Dear Robert,
Awesome story....I loved the way I felt like I was there, it was very descriptive...your use of imagery was professional. I liked the build up..I thought for a split second noone was going to jump and was glad Nick did at the end.....I didn’t read it myself, I had my boyfriend read it to me so I could get past some of the typo’s. I would like to read more about Nick and Holly’s potential love affair. That to me is a good short story when I want more. Nice work. It seemed real
Tuesday, October 21, 2008
Words i looked up from Roody's poem
tip·ple 1 (tpl)
tr. & intr.v. tip·pled, tip·pling, tip·ples
To drink (alcoholic liquor) or engage in such drinking, especially habitually or to excess.
n.
Alcoholic liquor.
ap·pro·ba·tion (pr-bshn)
n.
1. An expression of warm approval; praise.
2. Official approval.
tr. & intr.v. tip·pled, tip·pling, tip·ples
To drink (alcoholic liquor) or engage in such drinking, especially habitually or to excess.
n.
Alcoholic liquor.
ap·pro·ba·tion (pr-bshn)
n.
1. An expression of warm approval; praise.
2. Official approval.
Robert Munroe
response to Child from the side by Roody Jean-Baptiste
Creative writing 9am class
Dear Roody,
Wow interesting, I got a sense of empowerment from the poem. I especially liked the 8th and 9th lines...very strong. I got a sense you need to get out of a shell that you have created or that you feel you have been placed in...I hope that is the reaction you were hoping for from the reader...it is a little heavy. I had to look up a couple words (tippling and approbation) Kudos I love to learn new words. I was curious why you used the word impotent body..what did you mean by that?
response to Child from the side by Roody Jean-Baptiste
Creative writing 9am class
Dear Roody,
Wow interesting, I got a sense of empowerment from the poem. I especially liked the 8th and 9th lines...very strong. I got a sense you need to get out of a shell that you have created or that you feel you have been placed in...I hope that is the reaction you were hoping for from the reader...it is a little heavy. I had to look up a couple words (tippling and approbation) Kudos I love to learn new words. I was curious why you used the word impotent body..what did you mean by that?
Robert Munroe
Response to The ILLusion by Desha Gregory
Creative Writing 9am class
Dear Desha,
The poem was very interesting, it was existential to say the least. I think these are all things we at some point in our lives think about. The beginning 4 lines were very sad, I was wondering if thats the tone you wanted to set. I felt a twinge pain and sadness for you. It made me feel as if you didnt want to be alive. I was also wondering why you spelled illusion with the first three letters capitolized? The poem made me sad.
Response to The ILLusion by Desha Gregory
Creative Writing 9am class
Dear Desha,
The poem was very interesting, it was existential to say the least. I think these are all things we at some point in our lives think about. The beginning 4 lines were very sad, I was wondering if thats the tone you wanted to set. I felt a twinge pain and sadness for you. It made me feel as if you didnt want to be alive. I was also wondering why you spelled illusion with the first three letters capitolized? The poem made me sad.
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